Monday, July 13, 2020
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One day there was a cute little kitin her name is meme.There is also a cute little dear her name is Matelda.There is also a dog his name is cooper.One hot day all 3 of them went on a walk in the shop they bout jaffas and tim tams.After thay went to toy world.They got og dolls and lol dolls.THE END.
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Hello there, I like how you used Tim tams in you story. Tim tams are really yum biscuits. Next time you should remember to make sure you make more sense in your story. But I really like your story.
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